Friday, August 7, 2015

A Dom who loves to look in to his sub's eyes!




Hi Everyone!!

Happy Saturday! I have some awesome news to share! My BDSM M/m story is coming out this Friday!! :-) It is titled, His Captive's Heart.



Today I'm picking up where I left off last week. Marcus ran in to a solid, muscular chest. When he realized that the stranger was a Dominant, he adverts his eyes...

"It's all right, accidents happen. That spanking that the Mistress gave her submissive was pretty hot, don't you think so?"

"Yes, it was." 

I was silent for a moment and then the man asked, "Why are you not looking at me?"

"Because I've read that in a club submissives aren’t supposed to look the Dominants in the eye unless granted to do so. It's a sign of respect." 

A hand slowly moved up to my chin and lifted it until the man and I were staring at one another. 
"You are correct that some Dominants play that way. However, I am not one of them. I enjoy being able to stare into my submissive’s eyes, especially ones as exquisite as yours."

My snippet ran two sentences long. I'm sorry for that, but I felt like the last two sentences were what really made the snippet sweet!

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Have a great weekend everyone!!



20 comments:

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    1. This is just the beginning Renee. It gets a lot stronger.

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  2. And, Marcus won't be able to hide his reaction to Dimitri's hotness. Can't wait for this one to be released to the world, Meredith. Congrats on your latest, Meredith!

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    1. Marcus won't be able to hide anything! :-)

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    1. These characters are ridiculously sweet.

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  4. I'm all for going over the eight sentences rule - eight sentences are too short - and you were right, the scene wouldn't have been the same without them. I like Dom's who like to look into their sub's eyes... I've never understood the downcast thing ;)

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    1. Me either! I feel like a sub's eyes will show the Dom ten times more info than anything else.

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  5. Mmmm! I loved this snippet. I can't wait for it to come out!!!!!

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    1. Only a few more days Adaline! I can't wait!

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  6. Yeah, I don't adhere to the 8 sentence rule, either, but I try not take egregious advantage. You're fine. Sexy snippet, Meredith. I like the way the Dominant wants to connect with the submissives he's eager to play with. Eyes can tell a person so much. Loved it.

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    1. I promise I won't go over the eight sentences again for a while. I'm glad that you liked my snippet! Eyes are the windows to the soul.

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  7. That was really sweet and tender and sexy! I love a dom who's not afraid to look into the eyes of his sub. :) Nicely done! -Alexis Alvarez

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    1. Thanks Alexis! It seems like no matter what, my Doms are always sweet and tender. :-)

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  8. "A hand slowly moved up to my chin and lifted it until the man and I were staring at one another".

    Don't you just love it, when they take the decision out of your hands.

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  9. The start of a wonderful connection, so sweet and tender

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    1. Thank you! Yes Marcus and His Master have such a sweet connection!

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  10. Great snippet, Meredith, and congrats on the upcoming release!

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    1. Thank you Lucy! I'm really excited about it!

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